Asteroids in the Sky

10 07 2008

I looked up in the sky during the day time, and I saw an asteroid slowly moving closer and closer to the horizon. I ran inside my house, and I wasn’t sure what to do. I kept thinking “It’s going to crash, it’s going to crash into the Earth…” so I ran back outside and this time I looked to another part of the sky and I saw three more asteroids, all moving just like the one I first saw.

I ran into the house again and for some reason I decided to build some kind of shelter (although in real life, this would never work.) I closed the windows (because I was in my old house, which had this huge window in the front room) and I locked the door. Then I kept trying to lock the windows but it wasn’t working, and this random guy came and tried to break into my house. He got in through the window but he didn’t take anything, he was just telling me that the lock in the window wasn’t strong enough.

I unlocked the door, and went back outside then I looked at the sky again. This time I saw three spaceships (I guess you could call them that) because they looked like nothing I had ever seen before. I was scared, so I went inside the house and I tried to find my father, and I found him sleeping in another room. He wouldn’t wake up, because he didn’t believe me and he didn’t care, even if it was true.


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10 07 2008
smithjones

Expand on this, make it a bit stylistic, and you will have an excellent short story.

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